Wednesday 4 January 2017

Student feedback Jan 4th 2017



All please read your comments below. Next blog check end of January when EVERYTHING EXCEPT the evaluation questions should be finished.
Natasja       
4/1/17        Nothing new here.
13/12/16    Keep adding posts about how the preparation is coming along; behind the scenes etc.
Rosie   
3/1/17        Rosie, there is still work to do on this blog! More progress reports and the editing process...
Isaac
3/1/17        Nothing new here since late November which means you are way behind Isaac. Still only 11 posts.
13/12/16    Isaac, this is not up to date enough. Where is your preliminary task? Evaluation of prelim? Presentation to the class on your initial horror ideas? and the final 2 film analyses?
Laurie   
3/1/17        No further work here. Disappointing evidence of your commitment to this subject.
Tillie Rolfe   
3/1/17        Two super pieces of work here Tillie, particularly the analysis above here. One thing you could do to improve it is to go back and highlight in a different colour each time you refer to a new technique or use a new term e.g. saturation, filter, diegetic etc. Well done, very good shooting schedule too.
Joel   
3/1/17        Sadly there is nothing new here and despite your own acknowledgement that you need to do better you are way behind, Joel.
Yasmin
3/1/17        No further work on your blog Yasmin. Disappointing!
Alex M  
4/1/17        Good work here on the production co logo ideas and props etc. Just a suggestion but can you find the letters for your headline in other articles in the newspaper so it looks the same?
Casey
3/1/17         Casey you are getting behind. Nothing new here since early December. You have a lot of work to catch up on.
Elena
3/1/17         Nothing new since late November.
Alex H   
3/1/17        There are two new film analyses and your prelim task evaluation. The Hot Fuzz analysis has over 20 frames - you only needed to do 9 and there is much more storytelling than actual analysis. however there is actually some really good analysis in the midst! Don’t forget that your survey analysis needs doing as does adding your presentation to class on your coursework ideas, the script, storyboard, shooting schedule and progress reports on filming.
Maisy
4/1/17        And still nothing!
Laura   
3/1/17        'Reefs off doors'? [see last para above!] Do you mean 'wreaths'???
Great little film Laura and well done for using a new piece of technology to present it. Excellent commentary above. Well done.
Caitlin  
4/1/17        Nothing new here Caitlin, what about the behind the scenes, making of etc?
Hannah
3/1/17        Excellent version of a storyboard here. Well done. More please [ie behind the scenes? progress diary? editing process?]

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